Talk:Hell on Wheels (2007 film)
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[edit] Cleanup
I put the {{wikify}}, {{POV}} and {{tone}} templates on this article for the following reasons:
- it is not written in the required format for a Wikipedia article (see WP:MoS and Wikipedia:WikiProject Films/Style guidelines). For one thing, it shouldn't start off with "Roller derby is..." but "Hell on Wheels is...".
- it does not comply with the NPOV policy (e.g.: "The story is as compelling and dramatic as the premise", "this gripping documentary", etc.)
- the tone used is not appropriate for an encyclopedia (e.g.: "Sure, it’s roller derby, but it’s not what you think")
If someone could clean up this mess so that it looks less like a critique and more like a neutral and informative encyclopedia entry, that would be great. IronChris | (talk) 04:56, 9 September 2006 (UTC)
- I have done some clean up. It still doesn't comply with the MoS as per above, but not sure if that is grounds to tag. I would not be offended if retagged if someone disagrees with my removal of the tags.--Golden Wattle talk 00:06, 11 September 2006 (UTC)