Talk:Hanyang Arsenal
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[edit] WP:MILHIST Assessment
Not a bad start. Could obviously use some expansion overall. Also, introduction should include location and dates of establishment and/or significance. An intro should be able to stand alone, and "Hanyang Arsenal was one of the largest and oldest modern arsenals in Chinese history" tells the reader just about nothing. LordAmeth 11:25, 12 October 2006 (UTC)