Talk:Gay rights in Utah

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I am going to be working on this for a bit.

(above unsigned comment: 22:19, 26 November 2005 70.57.85.74

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[edit] Scott McCoy

Re: this edit: This seems somewhat out of place in our encylopedia. It reads rather like a student essay, and some section are obviously POV. That being said, it seems like a start toward content on this Sen. McCoy. I have removed some of the more obviously POV elements and the byline from the essay in hopes of making it more appropriate for our encyclopedia. I think more work may need to be done, I'll try to do some myself and I encourage other editors to look at it. Heimstern Läufer 21:04, 2 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Chris Buttars

I have just created a Chris Buttars article, bu it's still looking rather stubby... If anyone has something to add...

[edit] WP:BLP

This article may be in violation of WP:BLP. It does not cite sources for the claims made, and may contain original research. Please cite verifiable and reliable sources to substantiate statements about living persons. Thanks. Edison 00:15, 18 November 2006 (UTC)

A ref was added for the 2 legislators, but the article still says "It's a surprisingly fun gay getaway," said Ed Salvato, a travel editor who put together the 12th annual "Out and About Travel Awards" for PlanetOut Inc., a San Francisco-based online media service for the gay and lesbian community."I actually like Salt Lake. I've had great times there. There's an energetic, vibrant nightlife and very friendly locals," he said Friday in a telephone interview. If the interview was written up in a publication, that should be cited. If it was a phone call to an editor, it is original research and should be deleted. Thanks.Edison 23:37, 18 November 2006 (UTC)
Wow, the section disappeared. Edison 23:39, 18 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Copyright infringement

I already posted at Wikipedia:Copyright problems/2006 November 18/Articles, but given that this article has had copyrighted material added twice now (that I know of), should the whole article be tagged with {{copyvio}}? --Lethargy 00:44, 18 November 2006 (UTC)