Talk:Gallen Lo

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As well-intentioned as it may be, this article needs some cleanup specifically in the area of grammar. The article has the urge to shift back and forth from present to past tense for no particular reason. In addition, the original writer of this article (with all due respect to him/her) does not seem to grasp the English language properly, such as the word "whose", instead of "who", "enter" instead of "entered", and but not limited to, "had no any achievement" instead of "achieved little success", or "unsuccessfully" etc.

I've also noticed that there is a lack of sources supporting the original article writer(s) claim that Gallen Lo's popularity was "poorer and poorer". AWDRacer 05:27, 29 May 2006 (UTC)