Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Guitar

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[edit] Guitar

Partly self-nom (I have expanded the Inlays section, but the rest of the article isn't mine.) (However, this could be 'improved' by removing some of the too many external links.)

  • Object Very far from FA status. Should make a peer review. For the following reasons
    • The article is missing 'national guitar'
    • The lists Significant Guitarists, Guitar makers and Guitar technique should be transferred to daughter articles and a summary with overview should replace them.
    • Guitar etc. is not an encyclopedic style
    • Acoustic and electric guitars should be change into something like Types of guitars
    • Expand Guitar amplifier
    • Expand Guitar festivals
    • Reduce the number of external links
    • I think the article could be improved by linking the different style of acoustic and electric guitars with significant guitarists who used them.

Vb 13:39, 1 November 2005 (UTC)

  • Object. The image Image:Super400.jpg has no source information. --Carnildo 22:51, 1 November 2005 (UTC)
  • Object the article is too much of a list, lead should be longer and consist of only 2-3 paragraphs. User:Nichalp/sg 07:14, 3 November 2005 (UTC)