Talk:Enzio of Sardinia

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[edit] Wars

"He fought in the wars between his father, the pope, and the Northern Italian communes": this could be much clearer on who was at war with whom, and could link to relevant articles on those wars. -- Jmabel | Talk 21:14, 10 November 2005 (UTC)

[edit] Clarification

What is this trying to say: "...and was dedicated a French translation of the hunting treaty by Yatrib." - that he produced the actual translation? that he was dedicated to it? that it was dedicated to him? doesn't make sense as it is at the moment. ρ¡ρρµ δ→θ∑ - (waarom? jus'b'coz!) 20:31, 26 April 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Recent confusing edits

All of these changes were made without clear edit summaries or references. At least one is almost certainly wrong. I am calling them all to people's attention, hoping to get them fixed and/or cited by someone knowledgable. I have also fixed some typographical errors that arose in the same series of edits.

• Adelheid Enzio was changed to Adelheid. I don't know if the former is correct, but since the latter is a redirect to "List of minor characters in the Ash Crimson Saga", it is clearly wrong.
• The date he was knighted at Cremona was changed from 1241 to 1238 without citation. (I won't bother repeating that "without citation", it appears to apply to everything.)
• The statement that he was "born at Palermo (Sicily)" was removed (no other place was added). Is this in doubt?
• His wife was previously described as "Sardinian heiress of Gallura and Logudoro". This is now "Sardinian heiress of Gallura and Torres".

Also (not a recent change) we say "The powerful Bentivoglio family of Bologna and Ferrara claimed descent from him." Does that mean to say they were actually descended from him or that this was a dubious claim? - Jmabel | Talk