User talk:El Moro

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[edit] Syrian National Party

The material you've added at Syrian National Party is mostly good, and welcome, but the way some of it is written doesn't exactly conform to neutral point of view (NPOV). In particular, a statement like "His views of an historically unified Syria were never true" in the narrative voice of the article is jut plain against Wikipedia style: if you want to get that into the article, you have to cite an appropriate source saying that. Do you want to take a shot at rewriting it yourself, because I'm not expert on the topic, have no sources handy other than what I used to write the original stub article, and would have to achieve NPOV mostly by cutting. -- Jmabel | Talk 18:13, Jan 12, 2005 (UTC)