Talk:Ehrenfried Pfeiffer

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[edit] Question to Redecke

Removing links to source articles

You have removed links to source articles in your recent edit. Is it not important to attribute facts to their sources? Jean Yeager 21:36, 29 August 2006 (UTC)

Hello Jwyeager ! I removed only a single link (added several times) to an off-line website. Redecke 23:07, 29 August 2006 (UTC)

link is up again this evening, i restored the link. But imho: we need that link only once at the end. Redecke 23:56, 29 August 2006 (UTC)

[edit] language

you need to improve this passage:

Then in 1940, the Nazis smashed through Holland, and Pfeiffer, his wife, son and daughter took to the road as refugees. They travelled across southern France and crossed into Spain by way of the Pyrenees, and flew from there into Portugal. On an October day in 1940, they arrived in New York with a few bags and $50 in cash.

trueblood 21:09, 30 August 2006 (UTC)

hello Trueblood ! these sentences are from user Jwyeager. He is native english speaking. I think he copied the sentences from the webpage he introduced. my own edits (I am german) were checked by Hob Gadling as he speaks english much better than i do. the story itself is correct. I think we may shorten the passage a bit. michael Redecke 22:23, 30 August 2006 (UTC)