Talk:Egyptian burial rituals and protocol

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[edit] Cleanup

Alright, this page DOES need some serious cleanup. The intro paragraph particularly looks disorganized. Some sentences sound very unencyclopedic or unprofessional. Also, a lot of information is repeated from Egyptian mythology, or should not conflict with that article. I'm putting a cleanup tag. 216.175.112.139 06:20, 5 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] I am taking my time

• Added why they believe in what they believed in. --Cool Cat ^{My Talk} 01:51, 8 Apr 2005 (UTC)

[edit] I did a bit...

I am fairly new to Wikipedia, but I changed a few grammatical errors in the article. Even with the changes I have made, there are still major issues that need to be addressed. - P!3r(3