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[edit] Anyone pissed off when Vaders human face was revealed?

A fat old man. How pathetic was that? That one scene nearly ruined the entire franchise for me. I mean what the feck? Either not show his face or pick someone more... well, less fat and old.

-G

[edit] Clarification

It might be easier to edit this article if it were made clear what parts of it were overlong, confusing, or ambiguous. Treybien 19:36, 26 September (UTC)

[edit] Vader vs Ben Kenobi

If Obi -Wan were actually trying to fight Vader in Episode 4, would he have won? They are both old but I'm pretty sure Obi-Wan could have won.--suit-n-tie 06:59, 2 September 2006 (UTC)

Ben knew he would lose. McDonaldsGuy 14:17, 26 September 2006 (UTC)
That makes sense.--Atomic-Super-SuitWhat Have I Done?! 19:20, 7 October 2006 (UTC)

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[edit] Personification of evil

There have been several reverts over the last week or so about this appellation. I think the difficulty stems from the difference in viewing individual films (such as ANH), and watching them as a series.

The Anakin Skywalker of the prequels, has developed a three dimensional quality, which can make him seem, "understandable", the tragic character, such as one might find in King Lear, or Hamlet.

However, the Darth Vader of the first movie, was very clearly designed as a personification of evil. See: Star Wars sources and analogues, for examples. The design of the character's look, including the use of WWII paraphernalia, and the "not-quite-human" sense to the character, shows this rather clearly. Some citations from both sides of the debate would obviously be helpful.

For now, I'm putting the category back on the page, but commenting it out, until we have more direct citations of this (which is directly related to the request above). - jc37 22:00, 27 September 2006 (UTC)

Devil's Advocate- if he's the "personification of evil" in Episode IV, then why is he taking orders from Tarkin? In every film in which he appears, Vader takes orders from others- hardly seems like a "personification of evil" to me. Also, that "Sources and Analogues" page doesn't cite a single reference- it smells strongly of OR--DarthBinky 22:04, 27 September 2006 (UTC)
What does being evil have to do with being under someone else's thumb? : )
Vader isn't "vile", he's "evil". - jc37
Because he's not really a "personification of evil" if there's someone more eviler than he. You could even take the "he's just following orders" defense (not that I subscribe to that...). Also, several of the villains in that "category" I would argue don't belong there. Sauron wasn't the personfication of evil in Middle Earth- Morgoth is (and he is, in fact, in that list). Arawn isn't even considered evil, yet he's on the list. I suppose it depends on exactly what is meant by "personification of evil"- when i think of it, I think of it in the sense of being the embodiment/incarnation of evil, like Satan or Morgoth. --DarthBinky 18:39, 28 September 2006 (UTC)

Not every evil person is a personification of evil. - A Man In Bl♟ck (conspire | past ops) 22:07, 27 September 2006 (UTC)

True enough, but neither is Vader "every evil person". Check out the category. Vader is on equal or greater standing with several of them. But that aside, we're looking for citations at this point : ) - jc37 18:26, 28 September 2006 (UTC)

The characters in that category are actual personifications of evil in their respective fictional universes. Being designed to represent evil and being designed to be evil itself are two different things. If we went with the former interpretation, we might as well save the time and merge the category with Category:Fictional villains. Interrobamf 02:00, 1 October 2006 (UTC)

Vader was the first Sith Lord introduced into the Star Wars storyline (if you consider EP IV the first story). He was designed to personify evil, whilst Luke personified good over-coming evil. By the beginning of Ep VI it has become Sidious who personifies evil, Vader/Anakin Skywalker symbolises a corrupted being. Jasca Ducato 18:34, 28 September 2006 (UTC)

WP:NOR. -Silence 21:06, 28 September 2006 (UTC)

Silence has a good point. Please come up with reliable sources describing Vader as a "personification of evil" (or a "war criminal," since user:Treybien keeps sticking that cat on this category for some reason). - A Man In Bl♟ck (conspire | past ops) 22:50, 28 September 2006 (UTC)

Agreed (especially since I mentioned it above : )
I think it might be a good idea for us to go through the categories on this page and have citations for them all. I know on CfD, that's one of the things we look for is whether an article has an explanation/citation for category placemement. - jc37 06:44, 29 September 2006 (UTC)

I believe it is mentioned by GL on one of the DVD documentaries that Vader was orignally meant to personify evil. i'll check tonight to see which one exactely. Jasca Ducato 11:01, 29 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] You nerds haven't the slightest clue how to write do you?

The first paragraph is most crucial to an article. It should be concise, interesting, and a good read.

Instead, you tell people what they already know: Darth Vader is a character in Star Wars. Duh!

And then you go on to list, monotonously, all the films he's a big part of. It's an orgy of nerdy blue text.

If you want to improve this article, start from the very beginning and work your way down.

I'm not getting involved, because I know what vicious little peckerwoods Star Wars geeks can be.

Chris 22:13, 11 October 2006 (UTC)

  • Well your the one complaining, you "vicious little peckerwood[…]geek"! The whole point of this wiki is to inform and explain. Some people might not actually know that Vader is from Star Wars, he could easily be a Star Trek character or even a cartoon character. The fact that he's from Star Wars needs to be shown!! Jasca Ducato 07:50, 12 October 2006 (UTC)

Hmmm. Since you've presumed to judge the rest of us in our writing ability, I thought I would take a moment to look over yours. I think I'll limit direct analysis to just the opening header (between the equal signs), since you seem interested in introductions. And I'll presume you don't mind since you've already set the standard for mutual analysis : )

  • First, "Your nerds" - Should I presume that the "r" is a typo? Or is it that you don't know your possessives? (If "your" is correct then it should be "do they", else "you" and "do you".) I suppose I'll consider it a typo, since I presume that you weren't suggesting that anyone here has their own supply of nerds : )
  • Oh, and you should have placed a comma after "write".

Besides that...

Your sentence structure is choppy to say the least. Normally I would understand this as most people are unaccustomed to the professional written word (as most on Wikipedia are), but since you've proclaimed yourself an expert, I really might have expected better.

I also might add, after you've vented your opinion upon us (us, in this case, includes all Wikipedians who are editors of this article, of which, I am one), you decided to "ring and run" (to quote the character C. J. Cregg), through this sentence: "I'm not getting involved, because..." I didn't include your reasoning behind the statement because, after reading the initial statement of the sentence (that you refuse to help), I lost interest.

Part of assuming good faith of an editor is presuming that they will be able to accept constructive criticism. I hope you will. And I do hope you change your mind and join us in the attempt to improve this article. Just please remember that choices come about by concensus here, and not by any one person's imposed point of view : )

I hope you have a great day : ) - jc37 18:27, 12 October 2006 (UTC)

  • And to add the jc37's comments. Your message would fit into a single paragraph correctly, you did not need to space out every single line as a new paragraph. Thank you. Jasca Ducato 20:10, 12 October 2006 (UTC)

The point remains: the opening paragraph of this article is a worthless block of blue text. Chris 17:57, 13 October 2006 (UTC)

  • No, the new point is that you can't write proper english. Jasca Ducato 18:42, 13 October 2006 (UTC)
That's cute, chief, but I'm quite sure that I can. The difference between you and me is, when I see that's someone's made a simple typo (You vs. Your), I am not so shallow and feeble-minded that I have to resort to attacking that minor point, rather than dealing with the arguments put forth. Chris 22:54, 13 October 2006 (UTC)
Just to clarify, I wasn't making such a "point", Jasca Ducato. I was merely offering constructive criticism, just as I noted above. - jc37 22:19, 14 October 2006 (UTC)
At any rate, there's a reason that 'Darth Vader' is marked as needing clean-up. You fellas can start with the 1st paragraph, if you have any good sense. Starting the article on one of the most important villians of all time by giving a rote list of the films he's appeared in is, in my view, pretty pedantic, and very questionable from a stylistic standpoint. Chris 22:54, 13 October 2006 (UTC)
"if you have any good sense" - Any chance you might consider your "tone", especially since you feel: "...I'm quite sure that I can"? It might be more condusive to discussion here on Wikipedia. - jc37 22:19, 14 October 2006 (UTC)

Hello again Chris, coicidence it seems has brought me to this page. May I remind you and the people you are arguing with right now to avoid personal attacks. It's true that Vader is a famous figure in popular culture. But still, not everyone knows who he is. There's a first time for everything and many people were born after the Star Wars Craze (tm) of the late 1970s and early 1980s and are thus mainly familiar with the "prequels" in which Darth Vader plays a minor role. Even middle aged people (in their 40s) may not have caught onto Star Wars for a variety of reasons, i.e. dislike of science fiction. -- Solberg 00:21, 14 October 2006 (UTC)Solberg

I have to agree with Solberg's comments. - jc37 22:19, 14 October 2006 (UTC)
Quite right. In any event, Darth Vader is now a cleaner read :) Theavatar3 17:32, 6 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] I am your father

There is no mention of the ominous "I am your father" line, surprisingly. JaderVason 21:05, 8 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Is Vader the ultimate Sith?

This one always bothered me. I know that Palpatine is considered the greatest Sith ever, but, Darth Vader seems to be the one doing all of the lightsaber fighting, while the Emperor just sits and watches. So, basically Darth Vader is one of the main reasons Palpatine is feared. Does anyone else agree? sean7gordon@epix.net 11/8/06

This isn't a messageboard to discuss things like that. This is meant to be used to discuss how to make the article better. Cheers --DarthBinky 02:46, 9 November 2006 (UTC)

it can bring a good discussion paragraph in like: the greatest sith?

Pece Kocovski 06:34, 10 November 2006 (UTC)

Am pretty sure that Luke Skywalker is the greatest Sith Lord: he worsted Darth Vader in their second duel. Theavatar3 17:34, 6 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] *Grumble* bureaucratic Morons

I can't believe that wookiepedia merged the Anakin Skywalker article with the Darth vader article. In terms of size, it would explode (believe me the content on wookiepedian articles like that are huge). Also, it is clear that Darth vader is different from Anakin Skywalker with or without the suit. Either way, HE said it himself that he is not Anakin Skywalker at anymore.

What i'm trying to say is, please, do not change the Wiki articles on the two articles that wookie merged. Probably some do****** did it for some reason to fit himself. Hmph, ever since they started removing the special articles links (in the from of like eg: this place is just a big desert. With some really unfriendly inhabitants] (i just made this up.), and now they removed this links, which not only do leaves people asking, "what is this referring to" But it makes them seem just lazy, unlike before. And to think they say it "clutters it up", Well, isn't the point of wookiepedia to be the most detailed and elaborate star wars wiki ever??

all I'm saying is, wookiepedia has changed man. it should go back into its original glory, to the time where the order and archives were completely detailed and elaborate, where the quotes linked to many articles themselves, and the links to there articles, where in sentences and simple words like "this". Traitors!!!! (supporters of the merge)

Pece Kocovski 08:54, 11 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Category: Villains

There has been revert removing Darth Vader from the Star Wars villains list. I disagree with this, redeemed or not, he's still a villain. People are acting like "Oh, he's redeemed, now all those villainous things he did are poof!" Villains are villains. George Lucas intended for Darth Vader to be a villain (who was redeemed, but still). He is not a good guy, so he must be a bad guy. I am discussing this here because it currently says in the category section <Do not add this category!> by a person who has failed to explain why he does not qualify as a a villain. It even says in the second paragraph "Vader is one of the most iconic villains in movie history", so he IS a villain. Anakin isn't, but Vader is.

So he should qualify for the Star Wars Villains category. But some say he doesn't. Why not?--DeadGuy 00:11, 17 November 2006 (UTC)

He's already in Category:Star Wars Sith characters, which is a sub-category of Star Wars villains (and is also a sub-cat of Category:Dark Lords). - jc37 00:57, 17 November 2006 (UTC)
Yet Darth Maul, Count Dooku, and Palpatine are all in those categories and in the villain category. Darth Vader is both a dark lord, villain, and sith (as is Palpatine, who seems to not apply to this logic).--DeadGuy 01:20, 17 November 2006 (UTC)
If they are, it means that, while I'm sure well-meaning editors added them, they too should be removed. - jc37 02:06, 17 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] The Empire Strikes Back section

I added a citation needed to that section (and it was removed without really explaining it other than a weak claim that "is made clear in the film itself").

The issue is that the TESB section claims that Vader tortured Han because he knew that Luke would sense it through the Force and would come rescue Han. I believe this to be spurious, considering Vader tortures Han after Luke is already en route to Bespin. Second, the film isn't clear on it- I got the impression Vader was torturing Han because Vader was angry about the Death Star (they found out Luke blew it up, I'm sure they could find out that Han helped) and having had to chase Han all over since Hoth. Third, how could Vader possibly know what Luke could and couldn't do with regards to the Force? During the battle in the carbon freezing chamber, he makes a bunch of observations as he learns firsthand what Luke is capable of doing ("Obi-Wan has taught you well" and all that).

So that claim needs a citation. Stating that the film "is clear" or linking to a copy of the script is simply not enough. --DarthBinky 13:31, 6 December 2006 (UTC)

Would this rewrite work? (I'm new and don't feel comfortable editing the actual article yet.)

Through the aid of a bounty hunter, Boba Fett, Vader finds and captures the Millenium Falcon. He tortures Luke's friends. Luke, training on Dagoba with Yoda, senses their suffering. Fearing for his friends, he abandons his training to save them. Doodit 19:25, 6 December 2006 (UTC)

Well, it's better IMO, but that particular version brings up two new issues- 1. Vader/the Empire didn't actually capture the Falcon (nitpicky, yes, but true) and 2. Solo is apparently the only one tortured (Chewie was in prison and fixing C3PO; and Leia doesn't appear to be tortured when she shows up). Also, as mentioned, Luke is already leaving (or left, I forget exactly which) by the time Han and the gang get captured- so it should reflect that Luke had already pre-sensed their suffering.--DarthBinky 19:44, 6 December 2006 (UTC)
I'm the one who removed the request for the citation originally because I felt this was clear in the films. Here's my reasoning:
  • From the opening crawl, we're told Vader is obsessed with one goal: finding Luke Skywalker.
  • Leia asks rhetorically why they're being put through their suffering. Han states he was never even asked any questions.
  • To back this up, Lando enters their cell and corrects Leia's belief that Vader wants them dead.
    LANDO: He doesn't want you at all. He's after somebody called Skywalker.
    HAN: Luke?
    LANDO: Lord Vader has set a trap for him.
    LEIA: And we're the bait.
Luke has left Dagobah before the Falcon has touched down at Cloud City because he foresaw their suffering. As the characters disclose that this was all to entice Luke to Bespin, Vader must already suspect that Luke could sense their suffering and come to their aid.
Perhaps there's an audio commentary track on the ESB DVDs that mentions this... I could check later, if I remember. --Recurring 12:56, 8 December 2006 (UTC)

This is actually "sourced" in the discussion(s) Luke has with Yoda, including "always in motion the future is...". The point was that Vader knew Luke could sense his friends in future danger. That is the trap that Lando mentions above. - jc37 13:53, 8 December 2006 (UTC)

But that doesn't mean that Vader knew that Luke would sense it through the force. Like I siad, I never took Han's torture to mean it was some sort of homing beacon for Luke, I thought it was just Vader being angry about what Han had put him through (the Death Star, the asteroid chase). Like I said, notice that he singles out Han for torture. If it were such a homing beacon, then why didn't he torture all of them? Lando's prison discourse doesn't prove anything- do you really believe there's an unspoken "oh, yeah, that's right, because Luke can sense our 'suffering' and he'll come save us"? They probably figured that he'd find out where they were through conventional means (just my speculation, but no less likely). --DarthBinky 14:34, 8 December 2006 (UTC)
I checked the audio commentary on the DVD to find out if it's mentioned and Lucas provides the material. Citation is now added. Took me a few shots to get the link to look right! --Recurring 21:02, 11 December 2006 (UTC)
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