Talk:Darrin McGillis

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World Wide Entertainment was incorporated in Sepetember 1988, its Current president is Darrin McGillis.

[edit] Objectivity

The recent edits in the article Darrin McGillis seem to be of the kind described in Wikipedia:Autobiography. Please refrain from making such edits, and please don't remove tags from the article without addressing the problems involved. The article reads like an advertisement, is unsourced, and is not layouted like other Wikipedia articles (this is perhaps minor compared to the first two issues, but should be addressed as well). I 'm not saying that Darin McGillis doesn't deserve an article, but it should be objective, referenced, and complete (e.g. the epidose with his sisters suicide and the case following it should probably be adressed as well, since it got a lot of mediacoverage, not all of it positive for McGillis [1]). Fram 09:54, 7 July 2006 (UTC)

the issues in the new times was a small local paper that did not get any media attention is not a factual recital and is not relevant to his music career

Is the Miami Herald a small newspaper as well? Anyway, you are writing a biography, not only a text about his musical career. If it is relevant in his life (just like the different dismissed appeals for the Supreme Court of Florida), then it should be included. And in any case, the current text is not WP:NPOV. Fram 18:43, 11 July 2006 (UTC)

The point you make is clear without the link that was taken down from the article is self. why have the link if wiki decided in favor of no link in the article. Removed for that reason.

here is the correct link to the supreme court case you cite as it was vacated [[2]]

the herald story is no longer a valid link and since I corrected the issue on the new times story I have deleted my previous comments on this subject. I have correct the supreme court link on the mandamus petition filed as you had a link to a order that was vacated by the supreme court. above is correct link.

will try and fix main article in the next few days please be patient

(the previous comments were made by 69.165.142.31 on October 13th).

I have put back my original comments, and moved your comments out of them. Do not, ever, change or delete other's peoples comments (unless they are vandalism or personal attacks) on article talk pages (see WP:VAND for the official explanation). You can raise your objections, but you do that separate from my or anyone elses comments. Please als osign your comments, using four "~" (or by using the third button from the right at the top of the edit box). Fram 09:38, 13 October 2006 (UTC) Anyway, the MiamiHerald article can be seen now from the Google cache[3]. Fram 09:44, 13 October 2006 (UTC) And perhaps this "political advertisement" is relevant as well. It certainly seems to confirm the image of Darrin McGillis as someone who is now for years already mostly preoccupied with the courts of Florida. If you want to have a biography of the man, then isn't his current main interest, as verified by multiple sources, not important as well? Otherwise you are only trying to show his successes, which makes the article an advertisement and lacking in WP:NPOV. Fram 09:50, 13 October 2006 (UTC)

Will work on it did not know deleting irrelevant comments was wrong --69.165.142.31 23:31, 13 October 2006 (UTC) hope I did the signature thing the way you stated click the third button from right.

regards