Talk:Closet Land

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In the second paragraph the two parentheticals that encapsulate "mis" seem clumsy at best and an interjection of POV from the author. Although I can't for the life of me figure out what that point of view is. Are they saying that the "use of brutal and inhumane torture," is ok if its not misused?

"The film exhibits the use of brutal and inhumane torture to coerce confessions from innocent victims of unjust persecution."

This sounds better to me. It speaks to the intention of the story teller and not the writer of the article. (11:38, 4 January 2006 Billyjoekoepsel)