Talk:Claymore (manga)
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[edit] Help
I need some help in using a consistent writing style. I'm under exams in this period, and I can't get my head around the structure of some sentences. I have the horrible sensation that occasionally my phrases do not make sense. Federico Pistono ✆ ✍ 19:37, 14 March 2006 (UTC)
[edit] It IS the official page ...
The link you've provided IS the official webpage for Claymore, by its publisher, Shueisha...
I've modified the description to reflect this fact...
68.190.56.166 04:13, 4 April 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Volume 6 info added
Galatea and Ofelia's profiles, new informations about the ranking...
[edit] About description
It is just a suggestion. Your writing is clear to me. In my opinion, it would be better with less opinions. The quote like "She will bring sorrow and desperation to everyone who meets her" and "Not much is known about her yet" are more like personal views. It's like saying Flora(#8) is the most beautiful girl so far. Those personal views are not completely wrong, and they may have some truthes.
Ophelia is more than just a psycho killer. Both her and Claire want to kill Priscilla for the similar reasons. You may like her in the next volume. Galatea's story is well known. She's #3 because she can confuse her opponents with yoma power. The confusion can cause them to miss hitting targets. Galatea befriends Claire after they team up to save Jeane(#9). she is punished by the organization after she tries to help Claire.
[edit] Thanks for your suggestions
I just read volume 8 and now I understand Ofelia's story, Galatea's power and her team up with Claire. Her punishment must be in the next volume, I guess...
[edit] Irene's technique
Galatea just get more jobs to do, since she's still usable for the organization. By the way, I beleive Irene's technique is called "High Speed Sword".
Could someone upload the rest of the images for the Claymores, that would be great. Many thanks
