Talk:Circle Bakote

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This article is an unorganized grab bag of information and imbedded lists. It needs some significant cleanup to remove what appears to be copyright violations, and irrelevant information. -- Whpq 16:50, 28 August 2006 (UTC)

[edit] References, formatting

Could the editors adding information please refrain from just adding immense unformatted lists of names to the article? For all notable people, you should format the text to be readable, and especially include proper references. At the moment there are no real references, simply giving a list of names of publications (or whatever those are) isn't quite enough. I just now removed the important personalities section completely, it was pretty hopeless to begin formatting. -Aryoc 07:46, 26 October 2006 (UTC)

Lists of names of books somewhere in the article are not proper references... Could whoever who adds them please read the Wikipedia help section? -Aryoc 08:17, 27 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Repeated adding of important personalities text

Please don't add it in again. Comment here if you feel that is should be added as it is. In my opinion it needs heavy copyediting before it is reintroduced into the article. -Aryoc 11:30, 30 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] 'cleanup'

sorry, i forgot to mention why i put the tag there, my stupid mistake. almost all of the bolding should go. only the subject of the article, in the lead paragraph, needs to be in bold. names certainly to not get bolded otherwise. it does make it more difficult to read. for the rest, many of the terms & peoples names can also be linked instead.  ⇒ bsnowball  10:02, 13 December 2006 (UTC)