Talk:Chris Tremlett

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[edit] Tim Tremlett

Does he still coach Hampshire? If so, "which he held" is a misleading phrase as it rather implies he no longer does. I entirely accept that "now" is a bad word to use too, but another form of words ought to be possible. Loganberry (Talk) 01:36, 14 October 2006 (UTC)

Hm...how does it look now? Sam Vimes | Address me 05:29, 14 October 2006 (UTC)

Looks okay to me now, though I've changed "his" to "Chris's" since it was previously ambiguous as to whether it meant Tim's career as a coach or Chris's career as a player. Loganberry (Talk) 22:20, 14 October 2006 (UTC)