Talk:Blue Blood

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[edit] NPOV Tag

I've tagged this article as NPOV because of the overall tone of the article. The overall tone is rather promotional in nature. NPOV means that articles should describe a subject rather than promote or denigrate. This article could be easily made NPOV with a little bit of editing. I'll do so if I have some free time soon, but if anybody else wants to do this, go ahead. Iamcuriousblue 18:55, 6 September 2006 (UTC)

I disagree with you. I found this article to be informing, and did not find anything that would be considered "promotional in nature" other than the websites. Other than that this article sustains a neutral point of view. TheQuietPlace 19:05, 10 October 2006 (PST)

First paragraph: "seminal", "provided the blueprint", "and of course", etc. Pretty promotional, especially with no references to back up these claims. Instead of references, we get five pointers to their various web sites—why so many? —johndburger 13:59, 27 October 2006 (UTC)