Talk:Bicycle commuting
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[edit] NPOV
Though this article is very positive about cycling, which is good, it does seem a little POV. Almost everything is written to try to get people to cycle, I think there should be a little more focus on the advantages of taking a car or other forms of transport. I avoid going anywhere by car myself whenever possible though, so I'm not really the person to make these changes. Richard001 20:49, 23 April 2006 (UTC)
I agree. I'm a fanatic commuter-cyclist, and I agree with everything on the page, but this is really an advocacy page as it stands. Also, the idiom used is very colloquial ("loo", "brilliant", "breeze past"), which is perhaps not suitable for an encyclopedia entry. 213.131.238.25 09:54, 21 June 2006 (UTC)Dermot
Agree, adding weasle words and NPOV warning. PsYoP78 14:54, 21 August 2006 (UTC)
Updated, I've updated this page to try to improve NPOV, specifically focusing on the section that I have renamed to 'Controversy'. I've added a stub template since this article is not complete and I've added citation needed templates through the section in question. PsYoP78 15:27, 23 August 2006 (UTC)
- It's not controversy as such, though, is it? It's issues which are raised as barriers to cycle commuting, and all of which have been solved by those who cycle commute. I agree the article should not promote cycle commuting, but it is not biased to state that most issues have eben resolved one way or another by various people. Most of the issues are really post-hoc rationalisations by cagers anyway :o) Just zis Guy you know? 16:05, 23 August 2006 (UTC)
- Yeah, I agree. I just couldn't think up of a better section title. I like the new one much better. PsYoP78 14:11, 24 August 2006 (UTC)
There are some phrases in the article that still seem to be unbalanced from an NPOV standpoint. Since this is article is a stub and there seems to be some question about tagging this article as a NPOV dispute, I wanted to point out my current concerns with POV verbiage. I am looking for a consensus on if this article still expresses a POV. Following are some of the areas I've noticed that could be an area of concern:
- "While it is undoubtedly a matter of personal choice, and these concerns are not without basis in fact, it is true to say that there are very few issues which have not been solved in one way or another by those who are committed to cycle commuting." -- Is this an encyclopedic comment? It seems erroneous to me.
- "Studies have shown that the driver is to blame" -- "Studies have shown" is a weasel phrase. Also, since there is no citation, I don't know how they measured blame...is this legal blame, ethical blame, in what jurisdiction...this does not seem to be a world viewpoint...unless we can cite the source to clarify.
- "Studies have shown that integrating..." -- "Studies have shown" is a weasel phrase and the POV is questionable with the sentance.
- "Environmental groups advocate..." -- appears to be another weasel phrase and the POV tone is questionable with the sentance.
PsYoP78 14:41, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Dominant in China?
I would have guessed commuting by bus to be more common in China than commuting by bicycle. Can we get a reference? The first three paragraphs make many statements without references. Pissant 06:18, 24 January 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Commuting Time / Distances
I am thinking of commuting to work. Its just under 10km one way. It 20km realistic for a daily commute or it it too far? Please include some info on this aspect. Also how long can I expect it to take? I guess 40 minutes. Is that a fast and "sweaty" pace? --Mig77 10:28, 9 March 2006 (UTC)
- Why don't you try it yourself? It depends on quite a lot of parameters: traffic, traffic lights, road surface, elevation, your condition and riding style, etc. p.p.--Hhielscher 13:55, 9 March 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Email from User:Urban-commuter
I got this in the email from Urban-commuter:
Hi, I am adding a link in the URL: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bicycle_commuting. The link is highly relevant to the topic of bicycle commuting. The url is: http://cycling-london.blogspot.com/ It is about real bicycle commuting experiences, and relevant subject matter, in London, UK. Please do not un-edit this contribution.
First off, welcome to Wikipedia. I see that this was your first edit on that account, so I am assuming that you are pretty new to contributing to Wikipedia. I've left a welcome note on your talk page (User talk:Urban-commuter. I'm also assuming that this is your personal blog.
One of the how-to guides not linked to directly is Wikipedia:External links. It is generally discouraged to add links to websites that you maintain, see Wikipedia:Vanity guidelines, particularly the section Examples of vanity edits. (At worst, it can be considered Spam.)
A better way to go about it is to come to the talk page (here) and suggest that it be added. Since you already added it and asked nicely, I'm telling you all this instead. If it doesn't get you added, don't let that discourage you. I hope you decide to contribute to Wikipedia articles, Citing sources that are reliable.
If you have any other questions, feel free to leave a note on the Talk pages of the relevant article or user. Good luck! --Christopherlin 17:35, 19 March 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Another Concern
One concern not on the list is darkness - I go to work at around 5am most days, and I choose to walk because it is very dark some mornings, I don't have a bike with a light, and the traffic coming home is very heavy, as I have to go along a main highway and a very busy intersection on the way. Perhaps some mention of bike lights and safety at night could be mentioned, e.g. ways to improve visibility at night, and some guidelines to nighttime riding. Richard001 20:49, 23 April 2006 (UTC)
[edit] External links
There are an awful lot of external links for this article. I'm going to be bold and try to clean out the list of external links that do not seem to be sources for the article, per Wikipedia:External links. Please excuse me if I remove anything that is a source for the content of this article (although, it might be helpful to add citations so we know which external links are source and which ones are erroneous). PsYoP78 15:13, 21 August 2006 (UTC)
- Go for it. Start with commenting out things and trimming the obvious spam. Then change the reference style to use <ref></ref> and <references/> anything thats left at the end is probably not adding anything and can be drop-kicked or moved elsewhere. --Mig77 15:21, 21 August 2006 (UTC)
