Talk:Bel-Air Patrol

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I just removed a few suspiciously subjective words like "highly" from "trained" and "stringent" from "background checks" to cut back on the ad-like quality of this. I still don't like it. Dthatcher 09:56, 26 August 2006 (UTC)

There, buddy. I re-did the last sentence entirely. What do you think of that? I like it better, as I think it more clearly states the intent without sounding like it's trying to sell the company.

Like anyone's ever gonna read this anyways.

--Dthatcher 23:27, 7 September 2006 (UTC)