Talk:Auto race workers

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[edit] Cleanup

I like the subject of this, although I don't know much about it (I came across it via Random Article). But, it should:

• Have a more specific title
• Follow the WP:MOS guidelines. For example, it takes a while to figure out what the article is about and that should be in the first sentence.
• Wikilinks would be quite useful.

And more. . .

I'll be back to see what I can do to help. John (Jwy) 21:17, 15 March 2006 (UTC)

I have done a very rough cleanup - rough organisation into sections, proper capitalisation, very quick editing of any text that stuck out as not WP:MOS. I didn't feel up to tackling the main body of the text tonight, but I'll give it a go when I get a spare few hours. --Lucian Gregory 23:20, 16 March 2006 (UTC)

I've done a bit more; most obviously moving it. I've also adjusted the lead to be concentrated on the auto stuff. If we get a more general (not just auto) race worker article, that stuff can go there. Also, if we get a non-American auto worker article, we would want to rename this one, but for now I think its okay. I have yet to take on the cheer-leading tone of the article. Feel free! John (Jwy) 18:08, 19 March 2006 (UTC)