Talk:Aurangabad, Maharashtra/Comments

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There are a few minor spelling, grammar, punctuation or expression errors. Despite this, it is comprehensible, and well written for the most part.

A few more images appropriate to the subject would also be desirable, but are not essential.

For the most part, appropriate headings are given, and it's broad in its coverage, however, it is desirable that information under the following headings is given - "Demographics" and (especially) "Culture". "Geography" should be further elaborated. I would advise against a separate section on "Personalities" - perhaps intertwine these personalities into other sections (but this is an optional). "Tourist attractions" should be ordered a little more logically, by type. (Eg; temples and wildlife parks would belong under separate sub-headings or paragraphs)

The biggest issue with this article at the moment is its verifiability - there is a severe lack of Reliable sources.

This article has a fair way to go, however, it clearly has a lot of potential. Keep it up! Ncmvocalist 12:54, 6 December 2006 (UTC)