Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Yamahachi Dental
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The result of the debate was keep. Sjakkalle (Check!) 09:10, 8 August 2005 (UTC)
[edit] Yamahachi Dental
Delete. Wikipedia is not an advertising venue. This is vanity. Look at the second first person POV in this statement: They have a 30% share of the artificial teeth sales market in Japan and are proud to enjoy an excellent reputation among our customers. Whoops. Zpb52 02:15, July 29, 2005 (UTC)
- Keep and rewrite without POV. A notable company. - Thatdog 05:01, 29 July 2005 (UTC)
- Keep I rewrote it a bit, got rid of the blatent advertising content. People might want info on a company the made their teeth. Teeth are good. Hamster Sandwich 08:03, 29 July 2005 (UTC)
- Comment if it's partly in third person, and partly in first person, does that average to second person?—Wahoofive (talk) 16:16, 29 July 2005 (UTC)
No. First person: I/me/mine. Second person: we/our. Third person: he/his/they/their/ Zpb52 16:36, July 29, 2005 (UTC)- Actually, wouldn't second person be you/your ??? --Lord Voldemort (Dark Mark) 17:08, 29 July 2005 (UTC)
- Yes, you're right. Eighth grade was so long ago. I guess I didn't pay enough attention! Zpb52 18:19, July 29, 2005 (UTC)
- Actually, wouldn't second person be you/your ??? --Lord Voldemort (Dark Mark) 17:08, 29 July 2005 (UTC)
- Delete Los Esqueakis 16:45, 29 July 2005 (UTC)
- Weak Keep. As the second largest artificial teeth manufacturer in Japan (that kind of sounds like a joke... but it's not), it does have some room for expansion. The article would need a rewrite to make it read properly. --Lord Voldemort (Dark Mark) 18:38, 29 July 2005 (UTC)
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive of the debate. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or in an undeletion request). No further edits should be made to this page.