Talk:Areti Ketime

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Misread earlier.--T. Anthony 09:12, 6 November 2005 (UTC)

[edit] Article tone problems

  • Phrases like "...is a young musical sensation...", "...brilliant performances, along with her natural charm and an enchanting purity...", and "...was noticed by millions worldwide during her brilliant performance..." are non-encyclopedic in tone (see Wikipedia:Avoid peacock terms & Wikipedia:Avoid weasel words for WP style guide notes). MarcoTolo 03:33, 23 March 2006 (UTC)
    • As Oscar Wilde said: 'beauty is self-proving'. You are free to correct them though. Pictureuploader 11:42, 23 March 2006 (UTC)