Talk:Apollo 4

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I'm just curious how deletion of the word "even" in the Cameras section ("Footage from Apollo 4 is even seen in the Star Trek episode...") qualifies as a minor grammar edit when "even" was used as an intensifier to indicate the unexpected, since in this case the use of the footage was not in a documentary. As the original author of that word, I think its deletion changes the meaning of the sentence. Without "even" the sentence is flat and I would expect to see a more extensive list of uses of the footage than just that one instance. I do admit that the whole paragraph (and the original paragraph in the Apollo 6 article) could be rewritten for better clarity.... Jaydro 17:40, 5 July 2006 (UTC)