User:AndyZ/PR

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The following are some suggestions for peer reviews, listed here for easy access. They are also applicable for WP:FAC. These templates should be subst'd.

See also User:AndyZ/Suggestions (or version 2), written in prose form for easy access, and the javascript code.

Formatting

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Other stylistic concerns:

Content

Referencing:

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Images:

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Other:

Template	Content
User:AndyZ/PR/lead	Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.^[1]
User:AndyZ/PR/leadlong	The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
User:AndyZ/PR/leaddetail	The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.^[2]
User:AndyZ/PR/infobox	There may be an applicable infobox for this article. For example, see Template:Infobox Biography, Template:Infobox School, or Template:Infobox City.^[3]
User:AndyZ/PR/ex	For examples of featured articles that this article can follow as a guide, see [[WP:FA#{{{1}}}]].
User:AndyZ/PR/thispage	For other suggestions that may be applicable to this article, take a look at the list of suggestions located at User:AndyZ/PR.
User:AndyZ/PR/ref	The article will need references. See WP:CITE and WP:V for more information.
User:AndyZ/PR/cite	Please provide WP:CITE information for references/footnotes. See also WP:CITE/ES; templates like {{Cite web}} and {{Cite book}} may be useful here.
User:AndyZ/PR/foot	This article needs footnotes, preferably in the cite.php format recommended by WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with WP:CITE or WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add `<div class="references-small"><references/></div>`.^[4]
User:AndyZ/PR/foot (2nd version)	The article has a few or too many inline external links, which hamper the readibility of the article. Please convert them to footnotes, preferably in the cite.php format recommended by WP:WIAFA.^[4]
User:AndyZ/PR/quote	All quotations should have WP:FOOTNOTEs or other forms of inline citations.
User:AndyZ/PR/contxt	Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.
User:AndyZ/PR/datecomma	Dates should use either 0 or 2 commas, depending upon the subject of the article; American-related articles should use 2 commas, while British-related articles generally used 0 commas. For example, for two commas: In January 15, 2006, this and that happened, while for zero commas, use: In January 15, 2006 this and that happened.
User:AndyZ/PR/yearcomma	After a year, for consistency, a comma should either be used throughout the entire article or not used at all (for example, either In 1908, this happened or In 1908 this happened).
User:AndyZ/PR/linkdate	Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006.^[5]
User:AndyZ/PR/dateth	As per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use ^th; for example, instead of using January 30^th was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.
User:AndyZ/PR/time	Per WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. ^[6]
User:AndyZ/PR/copyedit	Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. ^[7]
User:AndyZ/PR/toc	Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Wikipedia:Summary style.^[8]
User:AndyZ/PR/expand	This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 2(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
User:AndyZ/PR/sectexpand	There are a few sections that are too short and that should be either expanded or merged.
User:AndyZ/PR/paraexpand	There are several paragraphs that are too short, which sometimes disrupts the flow of the article. These should either be expanded or merged.
User:AndyZ/PR/comprehensive	This article might not be fully comprehensive, as required by WP:WIAFA critera 2(b).
User:AndyZ/PR/headingthe	Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
User:AndyZ/PR/headingre	Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
User:AndyZ/PR/headingcap	Per WP:MOS, the first letters of words in heading should not be capitalized unless: 1) it is a proper noun or 2) it is the first word of the heading.
User:AndyZ/PR/headinglink	As per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), please do not link words in headings.
User:AndyZ/PR/hier	The headings of an article should be arranged in a proper hierarchal structure, using different degrees of levels if necessary.
User:AndyZ/PR/SS	This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, than an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
User:AndyZ/PR/caption	Per Wikipedia:What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions.^[9]
User:AndyZ/PR/convert	Per WP:MOSNUM, at Units of measurement, numbers with SI units of measure should have conversions in US customary units and vice versa. These conversions should keep to similar values of precision. For example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth". Note that the converted unit of measure uses a standard abbreviation, while the source unit is spelled out in the text.
User:AndyZ/PR/nbsp	Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space - ` ` between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: `18 mm`.^[10]
User:AndyZ/PR/spellnum	Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.^[11]
User:AndyZ/PR/abbrev	Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km², and pounds -> lb.
User:AndyZ/PR/footspace	As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
User:AndyZ/PR/noimg	This article has no images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Wikipedia:Image use policy and fit under one of the Wikipedia:Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.^[12]
User:AndyZ/PR/leadimg	See if possible if there is a free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.^[13]
User:AndyZ/PR/imgtag	Images need proper image copyright tags and source information. Several images are missing proper tags.
User:AndyZ/PR/imgfu	Images with fair use tags need fair use rationales - please see WP:FUC. Several images are missing fair use rationales.
User:AndyZ/PR/gtl	Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
User:AndyZ/PR/bold	Please do not extraneously bold items outside of the bolding in the lead.
User:AndyZ/PR/alpha	Please alphabetize the interlanguage links.^[14]
User:AndyZ/PR/trivia	Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.
User:AndyZ/PR/list	This article may be a bit list-weighty; in other words, some of the lists should be converted to prose (paragraph form). ^[15]
User:AndyZ/PR/awk	This article contains problems with awkward prose, holding it back from being Wikipedia's best work.
User:AndyZ/PR/awt	There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. ^[16]
User:AndyZ/PR/pov	This article might not be neutral and may be controversial in factual accuracy. Please make sure it is WP:NPOV, not WP:POV, by fixing potentially non-neutral sections and providing references to verify assertations.
User:AndyZ/PR/verify	Some of this sources listed in the references/footnotes may not be reliable. Please see if it is possible to search for better sources, preferably paper (books) or peer reviewed journal articles.
User:AndyZ/PR/guide	There may be an applicable WikiProject guideline to follow: for example, WP:STATE, WP:CITY, WP:ALBUM, WP:WPC, or another relevant WikiProject.
User:AndyZ/PR/underlink	Consider adding more links to the article; per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
User:AndyZ/PR/overlink	Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and WP:CONTEXT.
User:AndyZ/PR/how	Please avoid including instruction manuals, tutorials, etc. or other 'how-to's per WP:NOT.
User:AndyZ/PR/ig	Avoid including galleries in articles, as per Wikipedia:Galleries. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to a separate page.

Footnotes can be found on User:AndyZ/PRnotes.

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