User:Andreww/Desk

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Areas of Expertise Geology, minerology and crystallography; Materials and computational chemistry Interests: British History and politics Minor intrests: International organizations Article reorganization, fact checking

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1 Open tasks
2 Photorefractive keratectomy
3 Kambojas
4 Closed tasks

[edit] Open tasks

[edit] Photorefractive keratectomy

(on cleanup since September 2004)

I think this one is almost done. RJFJR 00:02, 12 October 2005 (UTC)

I still think it needs a bit more work (the lead section seems to assume the reader knows quite a lot about it already. I'll have a stab - added to my desk. Andreww 02:55, 16 October 2005 (UTC)

We were almost going to close it in October so I'm going to close it now. RJFJR 16:35, 24 June 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Kambojas

You'll love this one. Its not a copyvio and its survived VfD once or twice. Its a complete mess, its 164KB long, and theres no way I can take it up. The job is basically tidying up this collection of dumped references, quotes, and the occasional make-sense paragraph. Whoever takes this on, good luck. Hedley 22:47, 4 Jun 2005 (UTC)

Assigned by Hedley to Kaal. · Katefan0^(scribble)

22:27, Jun 6, 2005 (UTC)

Article is quite long, 64 KB not 164 KB. But it does contain interesting information though.

peresonally i dont see any problem with this article. it's perfectly readable though admittedly oversize. have read many wikipedia articles and frankly this one is the most informative one i have read here. *Dhar*

- The references in this article don't have enough context to be useful. They need to be turned into footnotes that give full citations, or at least that use intelligible abbreviations. The talk page also contains a gratuitous amount of information. It should probably be moved to one or more subpages, and someone needs to check whether or not any of it still needs processing of some kind. -- Beland 06:29, 7 August 2005 (UTC)

I started splitting up the article into various parts, but this still needs a lot of work. I will keep working on this, but it is going to be fairly slow. kaal 05:50, 10 August 2005 (UTC)

Added to User:BaronLarf/Desk to try and get some movement here Stewart Adcock 09:31, 26 September 2005 (UTC)
- Removed from my desk; not my area of expertise. Refined my Cleanup Taskforce listing to show this, as well. --Baron Larf 14:48, 30 September 2005 (UTC)

Ok - I'll have a stab at this and see what develops, I think the plan must be to go for a rewrite sub page and see if we can get help from some of the editors who made this mess! Andreww 11:05, 13 October 2005 (UTC)

I will work on this simultaneously with other editors--Vyzasatya 07:59, 16 October 2005 (UTC)

- Asking to check status on this article: Added to User:Vyzasatya/Desk RJFJR 17:14, 15 February 2006 (UTC)

Considering the fact how this article was (5-6 months back). It has undergone a major surgery and relatively easier to read now. But the content and information in various sections is not well balanced. This is the main anchoring article for the rest of the many Kamobja related articles. I would like to make few suggestions for improvements

condense information in some sections and expand some sections to bring balance to article. In short we need a bird eye view.
Logical arrangement of sections so that a section smoothely flows into the next one.

--Vyzasatya 16:48, 18 February 2006 (UTC)