Talk:A Place to Stand, A Place to Grow

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[edit] Cleanup

This article needs some attention. Some of the text is blatantly biased, and some of the sentences are gibberish and make no sense at all, for example: - "His pioneering concept of moving panes, of moving images, within the single context of the screen." - "In 2005, the song was mooted as a possible official song for the province" I don't know enough to be able to help, but hopefully someone else can.--thickslab 11:31, 20 October 2006 (UTC)

... clean up maybe - but neutrality???? come on! Themepark ..

• Case in point: "At times there are 15 separate images moving at once.This technique has since been copied many times over, with no credit to Mr. Chapman's vision... most notably (and rather with less impact) on the series "24" A better use of this concept was in Norman Jewison's 1968 film "The Thomas Crown Affair."" --thickslab 11:31, 20 October 2006 (UTC)

.... feel free to change the wording - I didn't write it so, I take no offense. Themepark