Talk:A Message to Garcia

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Paragraphs 4 - 6 are hard to follow.

You are correct. The story of the literary work got mixed up with the story of the actual events. We should separate them. Check back in a few days. alteripse 07:00, 5 July 2006 (UTC)

[edit] This "enlightened, inspirational" interpretation

I don't know what this means. I suspect the quotes are really just POV scare-quotes, so the adjectives should be cut. But I also can't tell what the "interpretation" is in the preceding paragraph, or what is being interpreted. Can this be rewritten for sense?

DanBDanD 03:36, 29 October 2006 (UTC)